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Dave R


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Registered: September 2010
Location: Whitstable Kent
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· Date: Fri, 19, November, 2010 · Views: 6782
· Filesize: 170.6kb · Dimensions: 573 x 576 ·
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Keywords: Drakensberg River
Film make, size & rating:: FP4 120
Film developer & temp:: ID11 normal temp
Lens focal length, aperture & speed:: 50mm
Paper:: MGFB warm tone

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Sat, 20, November, 2010 11:34am

I enjoy this picture but would suggest you consider cropping half to two thirds of the foreground rock away as the interest is in the river and flow patterns you have captured so well.
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Rob Archer

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Registered: September 2008
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Sat, 20, November, 2010 4:41pm

I totally disagree with Dave(!) although the water is beautiful. I like the detritus of sticks etc. in the foreground which 'echoes' the trees in the background. If anything, I would slightly darken the lower corners of the foreground rock which would have the effect of drawing by eye into the image.


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Richard Gould
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Sat, 20, November, 2010 5:50pm

Lovely image, I would darken the bottom 1/3 a tad, but as for the composition, can't fault it,Richard

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