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Rob Archer
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Registered: September 2008 Location: Kings Lynn, Norfolk - flatlands and big skies. Posts: 1,244
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Taken on a freezing Sunday morning on Alnmouth beach. It was just starting to snow. I'm not sure about the composition - any comments?
Rob
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· Date: Sat, 29, August, 2009 · Views: 7227 · Filesize: 39.2kb, 85.6kb · Dimensions: 640 x 445 ·
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Additional Info
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Keywords: Sea Defences, Alnmouth
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Film make, size & rating:: Delta 100 35mm
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Film developer & temp:: ID11 (1+1)
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Lens focal length, aperture & speed:: 35mm f11 @ 1/60
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Tripod used Y/N:: No
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Paper:: Kentmere Bromide G2
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Paper developer & temp:: ID78 1+3, Selenium toned
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Author
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StanW
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Registered: June 2009 Location: Invercargill, New Zealand Posts: 581
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Sun, 30, August, 2009 7:36am
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Composition? To quote an Aussie friend (FRPS in Printing), "There's no such thing". Your picture loo0ks right, and that's what matters. I can't say I like your weather.
------------------------------ Alive and clicking Down Under.
A sad case of GAS - 8x10 pinhole down to 35mm slr and rf
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Sun, 30, August, 2009 8:13am
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Try a crop just above the foreground marram grass to exclude the far side of the estuary.
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Richard Gould
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Registered: December 2008 Location: Jersey Channel Islands Posts: 5,433
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Sun, 30, August, 2009 2:49pm
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For me the picture is the blocks and the marram grass, the estuary and hills spoil what could be a great photograph,try a reprint cropping everything above the grass,Richard
------------------------------ jerseyinblackandwhite.blogspot.com
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B&W Neil
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Registered: October 2008 Location: West Cornwall Posts: 4,264
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Sun, 30, August, 2009 6:35pm
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I go along with the crop suggestions too. I love the arrangement of the stationery blocks and the contrasting movement of the grasses. That's all you need IMO - very strong and thought provoking in that area alone. Very good PQ as usual :-)
Neil.
------------------------------ "The aim of art is to represent not the outward appearance of things, but their inward significance." Aristotle
Neil Souch
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