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Old 29th June 2009, 04:25 PM
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Coupla points ...

The first bullet point would have greater immediacy if you italicise "by" and "for" ... I think. I had to read it twice before I twigged.

Learn from ... members' ... experiences.

I think you've left an extra space between "photographic" and "resource" in line 6.

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